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SS: Captured Pt2

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*Weird World, Main hall. Drew and Doc are searching for Zak. Fisk enters through the roof. Doyle and Komodo enter through the vents.*

"He gotta be around here somewhere!" Exclaimed Doc, " Don't let your guard down for a second, this place gets worse with each visit."
"Gotcha, now let's get our baby boy!" shouted Drew, running ahead.

*In the vent*
"Argost is cliché, he's probably got Zak in the dungeon." Muttered Doyle.
Komodo let out a small hiss. As they shimmied through the vents, the floor began to rumble.
"What's going on?!" yelled Doyle, before turning around to see Komodo being dragged back into the shadows.
"Lizard  Man? KOMODO?!" He shouted.

*Argost's dungeon*
"Now boy, crying won't help, but I do enjoy your misery." Murmered Argost.
"What do you have to gain from this, Argost? Causing a kid pain? That's low, even for you." Replied Zak. He was trying to be strong and ignore the pain but it was too much. Tears streamed from his eyes.
"You're just the bait, child, and once your family is here, I'll have the full set."
He pulled a handful of Mongolian Death Worm venom from his cape and tossed them at Zak as if he were target practice. As they hit him they burned through his shirt and caused his skin to blister.

*2nd Floor, Drew and Doc are fighting of a large Blood sucking Safarian Beetle.*
"Brings back memories!" Shouted Drew stabbing it with her sword.
"Haven't fought one of these since our African 'holiday'" Replied Doc.
As they defeated it, they ran into the next room, braced for whatever awaited them.

*In the vent*
"Great, now I have to find Lizard man AND Zak." Complained Doyle.
He shimmied to a opening, which flew open, revealing…
To be continued...
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SonicTailsBros4ever's avatar
Cool! Off to read more! Nice! Only small things I'd recommend are actually WRITING the description of locations and such, rather than just telling us with asterisks, and learning proper dialogue rules (which I can teach you, if you'd like)! :D